Hey Cynnsan, sorry I took forever with my response. I was busy with college and such and I haven't had the time to browse DA for awhile, so anyway on with the critique.
Its a good start so far, but it would've been interesting to see it developed more. Since this is just a doodle, I'll cut you slack in the meantime. You seem to have trouble with structuring the legs as well as hands, as these are indeed tough shapes to make believable. If it helps try practicing drawings your hands in different poses.
Have you tried looking into some of the FFXI concept art designs? I think that would help with your details on the clothes and such.
Overall, practice practice practice!
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Its a good start so far, but it would've been interesting to see it developed more. Since this is just a doodle, I'll cut you slack in the meantime. You seem to have trouble with structuring the legs as well as hands, as these are indeed tough shapes to make believable. If it helps try practicing drawings your hands in different poses.
Have you tried looking into some of the FFXI concept art designs? I think that would help with your details on the clothes and such.
Overall, practice practice practice!
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~Interviewer: Well, can you... blow up the world?
Tick: Egad. I hope not. That's where I keep all my stuff. ~
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Hiii peoples.
Though the hair is kind of weird to me. Anyway this would look really kewl if you coloured it!
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Hiii peoples.
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Hiii peoples.
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